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The Last Battle -rough draft- by MangaKa-Girl The Last Battle -rough draft- by MangaKa-Girl
So this is a really, really, REALLY rough draft of a comic I am working on; a bit of experimentation. I will add panels, scenes, and dialogue in the final, and of course vector it afterwards. That is if I get time... sigh.

~A vague background~

In Spike's eyes:
Applejack - teased Spike too much about his crush w/ Rarity
Pinkie Pie - exhausted and agitated him
Fluttershy - treated him like a baby
Rainbow Dash - bullied him
Rarity - used him
Twilight - never appreciated him
........ All of this took a toll on him and eventually turned him into the dragon in this comic.......

Still working on the story; polishing it, making the dialogue smoother, ect. Consider this as a little spoiler ; )
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CommanderEX Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014
And why is grown up Spike such a big deal?

There are like hundreds of huge dragons migrating regularly, and they doesn't seems to be a big issue. The alicorns alone should be able to handle it.

Also, why Twilight say that she failed everyone? If elements don't work, lets the princesses handle the situation. They have raw power, so it is about time they used it for a change. You cannot always hope that glass canon called main 6 can defeat every single foe Equestira have, even if it is their own companion.
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sigel4ever Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Student General Artist
supposed plot:

after kill the elements, Spike didn't satisfy his angry with her deaths, so goes and kill princesses and instaures a tyrany when HE is the judge, Jury and Executioner, nopony and nobody Cannot stop him for his "justice", even others kingdoms fallen in his hands

But he wants more and learns the dimensional portal, bringin his justice to another lands, another ponies and kill more elements, be friendly with him or not...
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CommanderEX Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014
There are like hundreds huge dragons all across Equestria, they are not super powerful beings that can take over the world. So Spike grew into a large dragon, and what? It not automaticly make him destoryer of words. Elements failed, fine, than let princesses handle the situation for a change and use raw power rather then relly on the 10 seconds win device.

Power of 4 alicorns can make holes in mountains, so if 1 alicorn cannot win, Cadence and Luna can transver their magic to Celestia so she can save main 6 and beat Spike.
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sigel4ever Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Student General Artist
there are some reason why spike are in a community pony, but for the moment, remain in silence...

the dragons (as we can see in the chapter with fluttershy and the dragon)
 are smart creatures. but for general are lonely (except for the great dragon migration). Twilight can challenge small dragons, but thye green dragon in Owl's Well That Ends Well isn't small

the dragons aren't too well explored nin the story, but clouds not normal afer all, well talking creatures and inmense (only the ursa major is bigger) is something in put in furter investigation 
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SilverStarApple Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That might be an interesting story, if it was well-written enough to warrant the deaths of most of the mane cast.
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sigel4ever Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Student General Artist
was only and idea, but maaaaybe
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:iconrainbowdashofthepony:
HE KILLED LUNA I WILL KILL HIM( gets a marker form dead space and a few reapers form mass effect and a BFG 9000.) TIME TO DIE SPIKE.
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:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
Spike at the end of his villian origin story (the show)
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:iconjose-ramiro:
Jose-Ramiro Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Whoa… this is too intense.
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davis78 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
actualy i bielieve this since the adult dragons have a strong desire or dominate or destroy, its like wild instinct. 0_o.
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:iconsigel4ever:
sigel4ever Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Student General Artist
and the world ends...


(even if spike is correct, he cannot confront Tirek, tirek is more powerful (update!))
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darkvslight346 Featured By Owner May 6, 2014
so will this ever be come a cmic cause i love to see it 
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Dino-Mario Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
After this, Spike went on a destructive rampage through many Equestrian cities a la Godzilla 1954, only to be slain at the
en, like the original Goji...sniff...
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spartan889 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
Firing !!!! * a squad of 5 M1 Abram Tanks opened fire on spike *
me: KEEP FIRING PEOPLE !!! Black Hawks you are clear for evac of the main 6.
chopper pilot: copy that moving in with extreme caution.*
as 5 more squad of abrams tanks camed and started shooting while the choppers lands to evacuate the main 6 from spike *


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i-scream4u Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
When did the tiny Spikey-Wikey get wings?????? 
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Somas-Illis Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
As much as I did not want such a fate to befall the Mane Six, in this case, I have to side with Spike on this.  Sure there are other ways to vent out frustration, but the scars left by their actions must have had such an impact on him.  Perhaps had they not neglected the fact that he too had emotions, this could've been averted... Ah well, sometimes it's true that the greatest enemies are the ones closest to your heart...
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fanfics4ever Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
please tell me this is just someone's nightmare!
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spartan889 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
Here I come. FUS RO DAH (Dragon roar from skyrim)
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:iconfanfics4ever:
fanfics4ever Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:?
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spartan889 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
Oh you dont know about skyrim.
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:iconfanfics4ever:
fanfics4ever Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
sorry, but no...
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spartan889 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
oh ok.
Firing !!!! * a squad of 5 M1 Tanks opened fire on spike *
me: KEEP FIRING PEOPLE !!! Black Hawks you are clear for evac of the main 6.
chopper pilot: copy that moving in with extreme caution.
* as 5 more squad of abrams tanks camed and started shooting while the choppers lands to evacuate the main 6 from spike *
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cometstar9000 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
NOOOOO TWILIGHT WHY SPIKE WHY???!!!
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Omrifere Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
I really hope to see this as a fully realized comic.
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Hydrazilla98 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Me: YOU!!! THESE SIX PONIES WERE YOUR BEST FRIENDS! THEN YOU JUST BEAT THEM UP!!!!! (My eyes glow red and summons a meteor storm)
*Yes, my cutie mark are making meteor showers and controlling comets.

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malis22 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
frost: *blocks the fire heading towards twilight* dang dragon fire i think i can do better  *breathes in* lets do this *fireball goes out mouth*
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:iconnickmon12:
nickmon12 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013
Look at the depiction dude
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:icongumballkitty:
gumballkitty Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
It be strange if this was a dream
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BLTmunch Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
Twilight: "No... This can't.. I'm sorry..."
...
...

???: "HOLD IT!"
[link]
ENTER - Luna!
And then Luna sacrifices herself to save Spike and the others, and only the Mane Six remebmber.

...Right?
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SexyLuna825 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student Artist
Music: "Wait no! Spike this isn't you! THERE ALL SORRIED!!! PLEASE FORGIVE THEM!!" Cries "Please.."
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Magnaliscous Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
Is this gonna be continued?
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LukaErCaiman Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
So is this how then Spike was :iconalduinplz:?
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CommanderEX Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
Why Twilight apologise to Celestia ?

After all should not Celestia or Luna be by her side in this fight instead of sitting on her throne, if elements do not work, mane 6 are just normal ponies, and Celestia should protect her subjects.
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MangaKa-Girl Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*Spoiler-ish* Celestia and Luna weren't sitting on their flanks this time. They helped but bad something happened to both of them putting them out of commission.
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CommanderEX Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
Yea, right, 2 powerful Alicorns were put out of commission so that 6 normal ponies would be defeated by giant dragon, come on, it happen to many times that it is not even funny, I do not buy it ( getting out princesses so mane 6 would have to do all dirty work is totally overused ).
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adrian98-12 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Spike grew.
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Flutterkops Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
Wow. I don't really think Spike would harm Twilight or the mane 6, but I loved this nonetheless. Looking forward to the comic. :3
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DragonwarlordX Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
Amesome :D

Can you make more of this comic LOL
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Krazymanstudios Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Eclipse: TWILIGHT! *Pushes her out of the way but gets blasted himself but he is unharmed due to his spirit armour* Are you okay?
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smileeme34 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Student Artist
Did you finish??
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jupotmachine35 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconnoooooplz:
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RGB64 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Though in a more realistic situation, Spike would run away, never to return.

And then he'd be hellbent on revenge.
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MangaKa-Girl Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
there more to it though :)
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REV6Pilot Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
People are like springs: push one too far, and it snaps back. They should have known.

Do we have an actual story to go along with this?
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:iconmangaka-girl:
MangaKa-Girl Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
working on it...
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Youwillneverkno Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
So happy this is still a thing, I want to see more of this
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REV6Pilot Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
Fluttershy is happy to hear that :iconfluttershyyayplz:
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DavidNinja001 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Student Artist
Darkblade:(Came in and deflected the fireball with his fist- er, hoof back to Spike.) Twilight! Heal your friends! I'll take care of him!
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MangaKa-Girl Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ohh who's Darkblade :D ?
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DavidNinja001 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student Artist
He's my OC, he's very powerful.
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